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Poem submitted to “Poetry Contest,” JCB Bruhl, sponsor, March 21, 2016        

RABBITS GALORE

Velvet ears twitch—spring! Cotton tails vanish laughing through pastel morning.

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Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2026 at 9:57 AM Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your short fun write. What a cute/fun RABBIT shape. Love both... Have a great day writing away with your win..............

Line Gauthier March 28, 2026 at 7:21 PM Lovley monoku ~ amazing art !!!

Regina Elliott March 21, 2026 at 2:04 PM Hi Sara, I owned several rabbits in the 70’s when I was a teenager. Both wild and domestic rabbits are charmers. Have you heard of the Continental Giant breed? They can be over 50 lbs. Anyway, great poem and rabbit image. A FAV! Best wishes for the contest and blessings!

Natasha L Scragg March 21, 2026 at 7:46 AM Wow!! Sara, that shape is amazing! Must have taken you some time to work it out. Looks incredible :-D :-D :-D gonna add to faves as its awesomely clever xx