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Rabbit Near Its Hole

rabbit near its hole
                                  eagle swoops down to attack
                                        sneaks fast as it can

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Harry Horsman

January 5, 2015 at 10:36 AM

both the rabbit and the eagles live depend on the end result...like this BL

Bl Devnath

January 6, 2015 at 12:17 AM

Thanks a lot for making me caught out. I know I can't fly away from you, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Roy Jerden

January 4, 2015 at 5:40 AM

Very good start! I agree with Debbie's comment...

Bl Devnath

January 4, 2015 at 10:08 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Debbie Guzzi

January 3, 2015 at 7:50 PM

the rabbit sneaks down/ its hole as fast as it can:an eagle swoops down- Light & Love my friend [you must join 2 of the lines gramatically ;)]

Bl Devnath

January 3, 2015 at 10:56 PM

Many thanks for your help. I will do with my own style next surely. Thanks for your comment too, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

January 3, 2015 at 7:21 PM

I can see it clearly!!!

Bl Devnath

January 3, 2015 at 10:52 PM

Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 3, 2015 at 11:08 AM

- Hope the Rabbit was the fastest - Great haiku, dear Bl ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

January 3, 2015 at 11:10 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl

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