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RABBIT NEAR ITS HOLE

rabbit near its hole eagle swoops down to attack sneaks fast as it can

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Date: 1/5/2015 10:36:00 AM
both the rabbit and the eagles live depend on the end result...like this BL
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot for making me caught out. I know I can't fly away from you, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Date: 1/4/2015 5:40:00 AM
Very good start! I agree with Debbie's comment...
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl
Date: 1/3/2015 7:50:00 PM
the rabbit sneaks down/ its hole as fast as it can:an eagle swoops down- Light & Love my friend [you must join 2 of the lines gramatically ;)]
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:56:00 PM
Many thanks for your help. I will do with my own style next surely. Thanks for your comment too, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Date: 1/3/2015 7:21:00 PM
I can see it clearly!!!
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:52:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Date: 1/3/2015 11:08:00 AM
- Hope the Rabbit was the fastest - Great haiku, dear Bl ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2015 11:10:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl