Bl Devnath | + Follow Poet |
Haiku | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Rabbit Near Its Hole

rabbit near its hole
                                  eagle swoops down to attack
                                        sneaks fast as it can

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2015

Please Login to post a comment

Harry Horsman Date: 1/5/2015 10:36:00 AM both the rabbit and the eagles live depend on the end result...like this BL Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 1/6/2015 12:17:00 AM Thanks a lot for making me caught out. I know I can't fly away from you, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Roy Jerden Date: 1/4/2015 5:40:00 AM Very good start! I agree with Debbie's comment... Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 1/4/2015 10:08:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/3/2015 7:50:00 PM the rabbit sneaks down/ its hole as fast as it can:an eagle swoops down- Light & Love my friend [you must join 2 of the lines gramatically ;)] Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 1/3/2015 10:56:00 PM Many thanks for your help. I will do with my own style next surely. Thanks for your comment too, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/3/2015 7:21:00 PM I can see it clearly!!! Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 1/3/2015 10:52:00 PM Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/3/2015 11:08:00 AM - Hope the Rabbit was the fastest - Great haiku, dear Bl ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 1/3/2015 11:10:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl