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Ra the Sun God

Ra the Sun God Ra Ta came to Egypt with old Thoth, 10, 000 years before the Jesus cross, The great flood had been and gone, Thoth, Mercury and Hermes were one. Built the Great pyramid, they did, Hermes the architect, stones were bid. Perfect square of line were they, Levitation, rocks, did float the way. Later Ra Ta was worshipped, as the sun god Ra, things he bid, marvels did, still are there, today. Kunkel says the Pyramid is a pump, lighted candle, Under a glass, vacuum sucks up the water, Pyramid has some secret class. Anubis, Jackal God of death, Gate keeper, soul to caress, Would guide your free spirit, To Osiris, if you were pure evil fate, Ammit endure. Don Johnson 28-july-11 tracie edwards Contest Name Write like an Egyptian
2nd place

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Date: 8/25/2011 12:37:00 PM
another glory, don!..… special KUDOS to you for a captivating win!...huggs!
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:55:00 AM
Nice placement in this contest. Congratulations. Mike
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Tracie's "Write like an Egyptian" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of tracie, Don
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:08:00 AM
hey Don mate rock on for a great win David
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:32:00 AM
These pyramid builders were well beyond their time engineering things we still can't comprehend. Learned much of Ra in this rhyming delight. Congrats on this win, Don. Gwendolen
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Date: 8/25/2011 4:35:00 AM
Yes they really were amazing builders the precision in those great blocks, fitted to last for centuries. Are we headed for another stone age, i wonder. Where we might have to relearn it all. Thank you Gwendolen, xo, Don
Date: 8/24/2011 11:29:00 PM
Absolutely fasinating and wonderfully written Don. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:06:00 PM
Congrats DON on a super second win with dynamite lines in this poetic art for the contest luv..
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Date: 8/24/2011 8:58:00 PM
very revealing, never new Ra was called Ra Ta? or the pump thingie! Congrad's light & love
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Date: 8/24/2011 7:52:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest Don babes xxx
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:29:00 AM
good luck in the contest with this great rhyme Don
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