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apparitions' wisps in mists of all hallowed eve . . . restless is their peace Oct. 16, 2017 For the Halloween Senryu Contest of Laura Loo

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Date: 11/1/2017 10:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this kind of cryptic senryu Andrea. Excellent! : )
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Date: 10/24/2017 6:59:00 AM
Love this, Andrea! Gives me goosebumps! <3 Kim
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Date: 10/24/2017 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Andrea deservedly won. xxx
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Date: 10/24/2017 4:48:00 AM
ohhhh wow restless in their peace! Deep words..great senryu thank you and congrats sweet Andrea :)
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Date: 10/24/2017 1:41:00 AM
Powerful lines! Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 10/23/2017 9:33:00 PM
Very nice Andrea, mysterious.
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Date: 10/23/2017 8:13:00 PM
As always, a top-notch write. Congrats on the finest win. ;)
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Date: 10/23/2017 5:55:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your top billing. Happy Monday, Sonia.
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:20:00 PM
A clever and beautiful interpretation of the accompanying picture, Andrea. A deserved top placement...congratulations! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/23/2017 3:51:00 PM
Excellent Senryu Andrea, congrats :)
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Date: 10/23/2017 1:47:00 PM
Hello Andrea, now I thought mine was quite good and then I read yours and realised why I don't come to the top of the pile. You summed up that image perfectly, absolutely fab, regards, Kevin x
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Date: 10/23/2017 1:28:00 PM
Lovely entry, Andrea. Congrats on your win!! Regards, John.
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Date: 10/23/2017 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, absolutely brilliant Senryu. :))
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Date: 10/23/2017 11:15:00 AM
Oh yeah....you nailed it Andrea....that last line a haunting thought for all. Grats on the top spot
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Date: 10/23/2017 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea...
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Date: 10/23/2017 7:22:00 AM
Nicely done Andrea.. . Congrats
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Date: 10/23/2017 6:49:00 AM
Back with congratulations! I did smell a winner :) hugs! xomo
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Date: 10/23/2017 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Andrea.
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Date: 10/23/2017 5:08:00 AM
Wonderful, Andrea, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/17/2017 6:19:00 AM
Your senryu has a haunting quality, very fitting for the theme. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 10/16/2017 8:31:00 PM
Has a haunted feel
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Date: 10/16/2017 6:38:00 PM
Trick or treat!!!! I like this poetic feat!
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Date: 10/16/2017 6:28:00 PM
hauntingly beautiful, good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/16/2017 5:00:00 PM
Excellent write Andrea. Your poem has beautiful imagery and I love the twist of the last line. Love it. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/16/2017 4:41:00 PM
Bravo Andrea, best wishes in the contest...
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