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R I P

apparitions' wisps

in mists of all hallowed eve . . .
 
restless is their peace


Oct. 16, 2017
For the Halloween Senryu Contest of Laura Loo

holidaysenryu

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Connie Marcum Wong

November 1, 2017 at 10:57 PM

Congrats on your win with this kind of cryptic senryu Andrea. Excellent! : )

Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2017 at 6:59 AM

Love this, Andrea! Gives me goosebumps! <3 Kim

Theresa Stephens

October 24, 2017 at 6:23 AM

Congrats Andrea deservedly won. xxx

Beautiful Scars

October 24, 2017 at 4:48 AM

ohhhh wow restless in their peace! Deep words..great senryu thank you and congrats sweet Andrea :)

Brian Davey

October 24, 2017 at 1:41 AM

Powerful lines! Congratulations Andrea

James Inman

October 23, 2017 at 9:33 PM

Very nice Andrea, mysterious.

Moon Flower

October 23, 2017 at 8:13 PM

As always, a top-notch write. Congrats on the finest win. ;)

Sonia Walker

October 23, 2017 at 5:55 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your top billing. Happy Monday, Sonia.

Paul Callus

October 23, 2017 at 4:20 PM

A clever and beautiful interpretation of the accompanying picture, Andrea. A deserved top placement...congratulations! Regards // paul

Gary Smith

October 23, 2017 at 3:51 PM

Excellent Senryu Andrea, congrats :)

Kevin Shaw

October 23, 2017 at 1:47 PM

Hello Andrea, now I thought mine was quite good and then I read yours and realised why I don't come to the top of the pile. You summed up that image perfectly, absolutely fab, regards, Kevin x