Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Quote Prompt 3

 "You must have known you were wrong when your fingers dipped inside me searching for honey that would not come for you."
-rupi kaur




   searching endlessly for sweetness
you crowded my reasons for letting you go-
         sudden heartbreak leaves no room for
                     sugarcoated delicacies.
 
       -my flavorless goodbyes...



Fictional Write- I love my hubby :)
November 3, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2016 at 7:25 PM this is really good, Laura. I think it must be done purely for the love of poetry because I can't think what contest it would support. You are being super creative here!

Paloma P November 4, 2016 at 5:58 AM Rather frisky quote prompt, no sugar coating here. :) Nice one Laura. Beautiful Scars November 4, 2016 at 10:35 AM thank you, I took it as him searching for her sweetness inside of her soul and heart, and she just couldn't let him in.