Brian Strand Poet Cinquain

Quintile Apr 21

So sad
full of care
the face of nan,
life,lines her beauty
so fair-
this girl
full of care,
this face of love
'cross memmory's chasm
I stare,
so sad-
youthfulness
we could not share
apart by kin's time-line
divide

"Dedicated to all Grand-mothers everywhere

NOTE:quintile(LINKED  sequence American cinquains)

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Kim Rodrigues April 21, 2022 at 5:13 AM Love “life,lines her beauty.” When I was a childcare provider my hands, at the end of day, would be terribly cracked and dried. It bothered my son but my daughter saw it with love…found a beautiful poem about “mom’s hands.