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Quintile Apr 21

So sad full of care the face of nan, life,lines her beauty so fair- this girl full of care, this face of love 'cross memmory's chasm I stare, so sad- youthfulness we could not share apart by kin's time-line divide "Dedicated to all Grand-mothers everywhere NOTE:quintile(LINKED sequence American cinquains)

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2022 5:13:00 AM

Love “life,lines her beauty.” When I was a childcare provider my hands, at the end of day, would be terribly cracked and dried. It bothered my son but my daughter saw it with love…found a beautiful poem about “mom’s hands.