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Quietly grow

Penny Pennies Into pounds Cost of living Breaking down Digging Chipping Gritty climb I'll come out on top I'll work I'll grind Sometimes short But never without Thirsty commitment dampens this drought Drip by drip Collect the flow Cup almost full But don't let them know .

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Silent One

Date: 1/26/2024 1:57:00 PM

Enjitee reading your poem..

Christopher Delegans

Date: 1/25/2024 9:24:00 PM

Really like the meaning a reader can take from this. Nicely done!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/25/2024 4:10:00 PM

Dear Julianne, Your poem deeply touches me with its raw portrayal of perseverance and resilience. Through each line, you vividly capture the incremental progress and unwavering determination needed to weather life's challenges. The imagery of pennies into pounds reflects the quiet accumulation of strength and endurance. Your words inspire us to keep pushing forward, even in the face of adversity. Very insightful, Poem. - Blessings, Daniel

Tom Woody

Date: 1/25/2024 2:03:00 PM

They'll tax what ya got in yer cup if they find out. Fer sure

Julianne Williams
Date: 1/25/2024 2:19:00 PM

Quietly become your best self. :)