Quiet Time a Duo-Rhyme

Peaceful pastel sunrise_ porch time
My quiet time in which I rhyme
Whisper to God adoration
Thank Him for His great creation
For His Son Jesus, salvation
Tell Him of my admiration
And thank for love's confirmation
Time filling with inspiration
Out on porch time_alone sublime
Dream more time with Him not part-time  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: Duo-Rhyme, Lovely Invention Of The Late Mary Ports
Written: July 9,2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:51 AM
A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Sara. Love, Carol
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August 5, 2012 at 12:29 PM
We were both daydreamimg on the porch! I love this beautifully inspiring write, Sara...congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 2:31 AM
Sara, congrats on your win, very peaceful poem...David
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 1:27 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your HM on this lovely inspirational Duo-rhyme. Andrea must have had a very difficult time choosing.
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Hi, Sara. I enjoyed your entry into my contest and wanted to congratulate you on the HM. The subject matter was wonderful! Luv, Andrea
Muzzey Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Sara, a lovely inspirational write you have penned. Best to you in the contest, a sure winner. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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July 10, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Sara, this is lovely. I think 1 should find all the time to dream... most enjoyed...pd
Price Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Beautiful, and inspiring, a poem of gratitude, well done
Rozario Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 11:18 PM
Wow really beautiful Sara...nice flow & all...like it. Best of luck in the contest.
Grisetti Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 7:13 PM
I lovely poem for Andrea's contest, it should do well.
Sivey Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:36 PM
What a glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed the greatest of messages within your poem! You have written a magnificent piece of art! I love your write! Great Work!!
Debrosse Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:32 PM
I like the reflection and rolling momentum adding to the sublime moment
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