Tanis Troutman Poet Rhyme

Quiet Tea

Can't  stand the word society
Provokes immediate anxiety
Same thing with psychiatry
It's the opposite of variety
It infuriates me justifiably
Makes me act defiantly
Almost all wrong entirely
I rebel against compliancy
Then I'll sit and have a quiet tea

September 21, 2016

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Space Cadet October 13, 2016 at 3:05 PM Perfect. I love it. :)

Moon Flower October 4, 2016 at 9:07 AM Enjoyed reading this. Congrats!

Richard Martins October 3, 2016 at 8:32 AM Love your monorhyme. Congrats on your placement :)

Anu Nayak October 3, 2016 at 4:05 AM Hearty congratulations Tanis, awesome poem :)

Ironic Zink October 2, 2016 at 4:49 PM This was the first poem to jump off the page in my contest. Great write!

Carrie Richards October 2, 2016 at 3:47 PM I loved the way you emphatically ended this wonderful alliterated poem !! Great work, Tanis!!

Beautiful Scars October 2, 2016 at 3:39 PM This is my fave in the contest! Wonderful rhyme flow loved it congrats on your placement:)-luloo

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2016 at 4:17 PM I can relate to this one too, Tanis. Every time I watch the news, I feel anxiety about our society. Love the way you just sit back and have a "quiet tea" in the end. What else can we do? Well done!

Keith Logan September 22, 2016 at 8:31 AM I like this and totally empathise.