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Quiet Poet

quiet poet sits
on the porch, eyes water, sneeze..
fall's ragweed now blooms

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Skat A

August 21, 2013 at 1:24 PM

shh! love it Miss Sara, love the new..... SKAT

Roberthenry Poulin

August 19, 2013 at 10:39 PM

so good an image, my eyes are watering just from reading this haiku, nearly a sneeze. I have sinus too bad and your poem nearly made me sneeze. A sneeze nearly had me reading your haiku. I think I will sneeze. I almost did. I loved it and I think yes, yes I will sneeze. Ah-choo a sneeze for you for doing a very nice job. Robert Henry Poulin. Ah-choo, ah-choo two kudos for you. (smile, you made a wonderful haiku)

Phyllis Babcock

August 12, 2013 at 9:12 PM

nice one. the ragweed is all around and the allergies are acting up. love phyl

Kelly Deschler

August 12, 2013 at 2:35 PM

Great poem, Sara! I can relate to this. It almost describes me perfectly! I have a poem that I am going to post today, titled "Serenity". You might enjoy it, please read it sometime. Also, thank you for the comments. It means so much!

Anne Rutherford

August 12, 2013 at 5:40 AM

Allergen is in the air , falls coming .Good Haiku Sara .So true for many people. Anne

Russell Sivey

August 11, 2013 at 10:59 PM

Ah yes, allergies, I get them a lot, especially around the summer and fall. My nose runs, that's my symptoms most of the time! How about you, eyes watering and sneezing only, or do you get runny nose as well? Well nonetheless, this is a lovely poem based on this! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this evening! What a superior verse! Great Work!!