Quiet Please

You have exposed my anger and I am on the verge to erupt and if one more word is to emerge and fall foul of my peace, this anger will erupt and disrupt both our harmonies, and I know you do not want to be a witness to this evil energy, and I know you do not want to be my enemy, so no more words just quiet please.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/23/2013 10:16:00 PM
I can so relate to this. I wrote a poem 2 years ago entitled "Shut Up" and it was all about the needing an incessant talker to just stop talking. Well done; I could feel the irritation.
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:24:00 AM
Good morning, Secret congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND
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Date: 6/23/2013 11:29:00 AM
Is it really? why was it chosen? who was it chosen by? Do they just put any poems up? or is this some kind of soup acknowledgment that I can write poetry?
Date: 6/14/2013 9:34:00 PM
lol... okay... I'm all hushed up....Linda
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:55:00 AM
Haha it was directed at you specifically, but I am pleased it has the same effect nonetheless :)
Date: 6/14/2013 12:53:00 AM
- S.P. lovely poem. - Thank you - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Have fun with poetry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:54:00 AM
Thank you. I am pleased you enjoyed it enough to take the time to express your delight. Xxx
Date: 6/13/2013 5:54:00 PM
I sooo love this one.!!!!!
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I am pleased you and some others appear to enjoy my creative writings.
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