Quiet Please

You have exposed my anger and I am on the verge to erupt and if one more word is to emerge and fall foul of my peace, this anger will erupt and disrupt both our harmonies, and I know you do not want to be a witness to this evil energy, and I know you do not want to be my enemy, so no more words just quiet please.
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Jmariah Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:16 PM
I can so relate to this. I wrote a poem 2 years ago entitled "Shut Up" and it was all about the needing an incessant talker to just stop talking. Well done; I could feel the irritation.
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June 23, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Good morning, Secret congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND
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June 23, 2013 at 11:29 AM
Is it really? why was it chosen? who was it chosen by? Do they just put any poems up? or is this some kind of soup acknowledgment that I can write poetry?
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June 14, 2013 at 9:34 PM
lol... okay... I'm all hushed up....Linda
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June 15, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Haha it was directed at you specifically, but I am pleased it has the same effect nonetheless :)
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June 14, 2013 at 12:53 AM
- S.P. lovely poem. - Thank you - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Have fun with poetry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 15, 2013 at 11:54 AM
Thank you. I am pleased you enjoyed it enough to take the time to express your delight. Xxx
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June 13, 2013 at 5:54 PM
I sooo love this one.!!!!!
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June 15, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Thank you for your comment. I am pleased you and some others appear to enjoy my creative writings.
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