Afolabi Muideen Poet Rhyme

Quiet of the Night Leaves

The displayed of the moon
With half pale eye
Is as a person closed one eye
Delightful breeze makes
The leaves to waft
Miming with their tiny branches
Fingers,left and right
Back and front
As the crows lure the night
To fell with their sonorous vent
Is as a grouped of people carring out
Acrobatic foxtrot
The quiet of the night
Leaves giving thanks to orb of the night
For brighten the night

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Lee Carter August 1, 2015 at 9:19 AM Beautiful write AM! And thanks for reading my nature poem! ~lee

Robert Lindley August 1, 2015 at 8:53 AM You hit a home run with this one!I loved every word of it. Great poem!A7

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2015 at 9:40 PM what beautiful imagery of those leaves. Loved that line where they are miming with their tiny branches!!

Skat A July 31, 2015 at 3:17 PM lovely write... its so mesmerizing

Daver Austin July 31, 2015 at 11:22 AM "The leaves, miming with their tiny branches." The Moon winks like a person in this one. I love, that. You bring the non human to life so imaginatively. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick July 31, 2015 at 8:40 AM Very descriptive work..Night can be a very peaceful time..Sara

Gary Bateman July 31, 2015 at 3:37 AM Hello AM!! An excellent write here!! The power of your imagery in the 15 stanzas here leaves a definite message of contemplation for the reader. Enjoyed your write!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Paul Callus July 30, 2015 at 4:47 PM Imagery and personification make this a poem worthy of praise, Afolabi. Night is very inspiring. // paul