Get Your Premium Membership

Quiet Farewell

Silent, heavy,
Weighing, breaking, fading,
A shadow lost within—
A quiet goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/10/2025 8:39:00 PM
An evocative write! Seems something felt within…likely a loss.
Login to Reply
Velasco Avatar
Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 8:59:00 PM
Thank you! You’re right—there’s a layer of loss woven in, but also a quiet holding on to what still remains.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry