Quiet Farewell

Silent, heavy,
Weighing, breaking, fading,
A shadow lost within—
A quiet goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 8:39 PM
An evocative write! Seems something felt within…likely a loss.
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Thank you! You’re right—there’s a layer of loss woven in, but also a quiet holding on to what still remains.
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