Quicksand Bird - Haiku

Quicksand Bird - Haiku

quicksand folds over
final wave of wing, good-bye
bird succumbs, day ends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 5:36 AM
Sad one..Sara
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April 9, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Good morning Sara, Thank you for commenting. I was going to say, "I'm glad you enjoyed it." but I don't know how enjoyable it is. I think you appreciate its meaning so I'm glad you appreciated it. Poor little birdie... It was just going after a snack on the soft sand...when things went south. Such is life. I hope you have a great day. Take care. Earl
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