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Quick Summer Shower On the Sandcastle

. Sandcastle _ moat filled Safety security sound Quick summer shower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/9/2010 5:32:00 AM
The win is deserved ... those summer showers will do you in, but a a good poem stands like a rock forever.
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations, SAra in this contest. Can't trust those summer showers! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:44:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your success.-kashinath
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:47:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend... enjoy another victory and honor tonight with luv.. excellent blog too..
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:11:00 PM
good work with this sara, happy to see your placement. all the best Joe.
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your success with your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:39:00 AM
Congrats on your success in contest... luv Michael
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:41:00 AM
deep and truly well written, with much love, lightening ink.
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:47:00 AM
Nice piece my friend
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations, i too would like to write in this form :-)
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved Hm win in the contest of skat, Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:46:00 AM
nice writing
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara on your success of winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:46:00 PM
HELLO SARA, ~CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR HM! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2010 8:45:00 PM
Wow Sara. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:31:00 PM
Very nice and original haiku, dear Sara. It's a winner for sure. Love, iolanda
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:25:00 PM
Nice thought safety sound sound quick summer shower and nice alliteration, Sara
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:15:00 PM
Nice Summer scene Sara.. and great alliteration as well in your poem.. good luck in the contest my friend with luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:31:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed,..p.d.
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