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Quick Summer Shower On the Sandcastle

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Sandcastle _ moat filled
                 Safety security sound
                                Quick summer shower

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David Smalling

December 9, 2010 at 5:32 AM

The win is deserved ... those summer showers will do you in, but a a good poem stands like a rock forever.

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 6:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 10:08 PM

Congratulations, SAra in this contest. Can't trust those summer showers! Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

December 6, 2010 at 7:44 PM

Congrats Sara on your success.-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 6, 2010 at 3:47 PM

Congrats Sara on your HM in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend... enjoy another victory and honor tonight with luv.. excellent blog too..

Joe Maverick

December 6, 2010 at 12:11 PM

good work with this sara, happy to see your placement. all the best Joe.

John Freeman

December 6, 2010 at 8:38 AM

Congratulations Sara, on your success with your worthy poem. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

December 6, 2010 at 4:39 AM

Congrats on your success in contest... luv Michael

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

December 6, 2010 at 3:41 AM

deep and truly well written, with much love, lightening ink.

Felix Abbey-Mensah

December 6, 2010 at 2:47 AM

Nice piece my friend

Suresh Iyer

December 6, 2010 at 2:46 AM

Congratulations, i too would like to write in this form :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 2:25 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved Hm win in the contest of skat, Sara

Anthony Barrow

December 6, 2010 at 12:46 AM

nice writing

Noel Villarosa

December 5, 2010 at 10:43 PM

Congratulations, Sara on your success of winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 9:46 PM

HELLO SARA, ~CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR HM! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT