Quick Fix

Sabotaging my dying will with small treats
Under hoping that sweets are not my only taking happiness
Greatly appreciated though the free quick fill of pizazz 
Am I ever such a child when it comes to my share
Rare are the chances; for when you get older, not much candy is allowed

Relentless is my mouth for another taste
Urging is my body for a quicker pace
Simple are the treasures in my hand
Huzzah! A needed chocolate fix
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Knox Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 4:25 PM
i believe evryone had a weak spot for chocolate .... now i have the munchies .... good job :)
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 4:29 AM
Fantastic Acrostic Jessica. Now share that box of chocolate. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Nicely written Acrostic. Sara
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