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Quick, bring him closer For new blood is what we need Come girls, time to feed. Entry for Halloween Senryu - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Laura loo 10/10/2017

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Kevin Shaw

Date: 10/24/2017 4:30:00 PM

Oh! very chilling, the stuff of nightmares, well written,regards, Kevin

Gary Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 4:32:00 PM

Thank you Kevin :)

James Inman

Date: 10/24/2017 9:05:00 AM

Ah, this one I find to be overtly creepy, I like it Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 9:37:00 AM

Thank you James :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2017 7:24:00 AM

Scary! Congrats! <3 Kim

Gary Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Lu Loo

Date: 10/24/2017 5:56:00 AM

yikes, you have to run when it's time to feed! thank you and congrats :)

Gary Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Laura, your competition was great fun :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2017 3:40:00 PM

I like this. vampire stories are so cool!!

Gary Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thank you Andrea :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 11:06:00 AM

Loved it Gary, congratulations...

Gary Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Charlie :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2017 7:42:00 PM

Excellent senryu Gary. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

Gary Smith
Date: 10/11/2017 1:09:00 AM

Thank you Susan :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/10/2017 9:59:00 AM

Great Halloween senryu!

Gary Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)