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Quick, bring him closer

For new blood is what we need

Come girls, time to feed.





Entry for Halloween Senryu - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Laura loo
10/10/2017

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2017

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October 24, 2017 at 4:30 PM

Oh! very chilling, the stuff of nightmares, well written,regards, Kevin

October 24, 2017 at 4:32 PM

Thank you Kevin :)

October 24, 2017 at 9:05 AM

Ah, this one I find to be overtly creepy, I like it Gary.

October 24, 2017 at 9:37 AM

Thank you James :)

October 24, 2017 at 7:24 AM

Scary! Congrats! <3 Kim

October 24, 2017 at 7:30 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Beautiful Scars

October 24, 2017 at 5:56 AM

yikes, you have to run when it's time to feed! thank you and congrats :)

October 24, 2017 at 6:02 AM

Thank you Laura, your competition was great fun :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2017 at 3:40 PM

I like this. vampire stories are so cool!!

October 23, 2017 at 3:52 PM

Thank you Andrea :)

October 23, 2017 at 11:06 AM

Loved it Gary, congratulations...

October 23, 2017 at 11:20 AM

Thank you Charlie :)

October 10, 2017 at 7:42 PM

Excellent senryu Gary. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

October 11, 2017 at 1:09 AM

Thank you Susan :)

October 10, 2017 at 9:59 AM

Great Halloween senryu!

October 10, 2017 at 10:01 AM

Thank you Kim :)

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