Questions

I don't know what else to feel

its like I'm slipping i don't know whats real

the room is getting dark

and it seems like your the only one who talks

all control i had is no longer mine

its like I'm no longer in charge of time

things are so unclear

 I'm filled with fear

how did things get this bad

i feel like i cant even smile the only emotion i have is sad

when did things get to be this hard?

you cant just fix this with a greeting card

I'm fighting to stay awake

but the more i fight the less i can take

why are you doing this to me?

why make me feel so lost i cant see?

see what?, see this

see nothing, what did i miss?

what turn was off the map?

what made me fear everything even your tap?

the world is no longer my friend

i don't even know if it really existed is it the end?

but wait i hear something

what is it i don't know anything

i hear cries but who could it be is it a surprise?

the more time i spend here the louder it gets

now I'm growing to be very upset

are those cries for me or are they for you?

anyway i didn't even ask who are you?

this cant be true are you saying in general?

that everyone is here to attend my funeral?

how do you know it wasn't some lie you read?

are you saying i cant see them because I'm dead?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 16, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Keep knocking and keep asking! Thanks for sharing and welcome to the soup! Steve
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