Questions

Touched

A soft breeze tickles my senses
Like cotton candy triggering sweetness 
Am I touched by another world
Where love embraces my emptiness
Far away from worldly matters
Three dimensional or not
Questions arise and provoke the critics
Yet Science is proof of what?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 12:58 PM
An Elegaic of the intrusion upon our reality, but again a gift of sensuous beauty. Stay as beautiful as your words, and love shall embrace nothing empty in you. Peace and love
Chircop Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 2:53 PM
well penned:-)i love it-charma
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