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Question You

Why you hate me?
I don’t hate you.
I try to do everyone right even a damned fool.
Why hate me boo?
You want to walk in my shoes.

You don't love me like I love you.
We were close once best friends in school.
Why you hate me boo?
You can't walk a mile in my shoes.

We aren't friends anymore.
No amends you have for it.
I do not know what your ailments are.
We no longer share the same ideas.

Why you hate me boo?
I am not one to make up with you.
We do not have to speak from herein.
Your problems are your delirium.

~Why you hate me Boo...~
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PENNED ON SEPTEMBER 03, 2014!

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Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/2/2015 4:10:00 AM Nice one, congrats Verlena...huggs Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/2/2015 9:27:00 AM Thanks Kayods for you congratulations... Much appreciated! Verlena

Jan Allison Date: 1/1/2015 7:48:00 PM such a shame when friendships end sometimes for no apparant reason - powerful write Verlena- many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/2/2015 9:28:00 AM Thanks Jan for your superlative remarks... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/1/2015 6:57:00 PM VERLENA, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/1/2015 7:25:00 PM Thanks for your support PD... Verlena

BE Bailey Date: 11/5/2014 12:37:00 PM This is a beautiful piece Verlena and a sad reality of what is happening these days. We lose so many friends but God will replace them with new ones. Always stay true to yourself. My "I will always be me" poem is a similar story. Take care dear friend "B" Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 11/5/2014 7:29:00 PM Thanks for your super-awesome remarks B. Verlena

Robert Lindley Date: 9/12/2014 10:01:00 PM Sorry you lost a friend. I too have lost longtime friends due to taking a principled stand. Great write my friend. Giving this one a solid 7... Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/12/2014 10:15:00 PM Thanks Robert for you super-awesome response. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/12/2014 10:11:00 AM It's hard when a long friendship will part and no other way but just to stop all..sad write.. Thanks for the place..:) GBU Verlena..:) Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/12/2014 11:33:00 AM Anytime Olive... It is enriching to know that this friendship was one sided and the breach was not because of your ways. "So called" friends are something of the ordinary. I like exceptional people. You are one Olive. Beautiful and gifted with psalm. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/3/2014 4:27:00 PM I think it is sad when old friends go in opposite directions. They out grow us or we out grow them. I think it has less to do with hate and more to do with diverging pathways. Some are attracted to bright lights, some to sorrow. We don't always know what is going on with them, we can inquire but sometimes they won't share. Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/3/2014 5:39:00 PM That is so true Richard. This happen to be a true story. I chose the title Question You because it was how I felt - empowering. Verlena