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Is life really a game? because if it was, should their be a winner? Is their really a god? because if their was, should we be able to see him? Is love for real? or just the urge to sex, or even the fear to loneliness? "No ones perfect?" or an excuse to foolish childish choices? Why not try to be perfect? try to be better? better yet feel satisfied personally Or you like most of humans care about what others think? and tend to mold to society? SOCIETY? being in style, buying a pair of shoes you saw a rap star wearing on t.v? your mother buys you a shirt, cause SHE thought it looked nice and you take it and say "UMMMM its okay" just cause maybe you may be criticized and made fun at school, or even work? Ive been told to be loud at times and even too outspoken but, i rather be that way than to look like and sound like a HIPOCRITE, @#$% that!!!!

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Date: 8/10/2009 1:04:00 PM
well penned,very good work,welcome to our soup site--charma:)
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:02:00 AM
Different. Sara
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Date: 8/9/2009 9:41:00 AM
Hello Fernando and welcome to PoetrySoup. I wish you the best in your future wrieings. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2009 11:58:00 PM
OOOoooOooOoOoo so far your getting off the right foot with me :p like people that don't give an F what others think and don't tread along others foots steps. Just need to brush up a tad to add more poetic style in my opinion, but other than that High Five!
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:54:00 PM
am smilin' Fernando! poetry allows us to express our feelings, well done (love the passionate acronyms at the end!) jim
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