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true love asks what about you instead of first asking what about me
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Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 5:42 AM
So true, Sam ~ congrats on your top win
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 1:36 AM
Woww... what good thoughts... Great entry and congrats on your win Sam. God bless.. ~ Ani
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations! So true, and so beautifully expressed! Love ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Mala! This one just seemed to write itself as a culmination of many thoughts and experiences. Take care dear friend! Love Sam.
Evans Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations.
Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Many thanks for your lovely words Marilene! They lift me up and put a smile on my face! Many smiles of blessings for you!
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Such true words Sam. Superb Monoku. Look after yourself. Top notch submission. Best wishes, Brian
Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Thank you so much Brian. So grateful and appreciative of your visit and your message that raised up my spirits. It was an adventure exploring the essence of love in seventeen syllables.
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March 4, 2021 at 12:44 PM
Selflessness Sam, perfectly portrays true love, Amazing how much one line can say, and tell about a persons feelings without spelling it out, congratulations top spot fully deserved, cheers David
Kauffman Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Hi David, it just seemed to me that a relationship based in "selflessness" is at the core can do nothing but flourish. Thank you for your gracious words of encouragement and your perceptivity. All the best.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 2:54 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... beautifully written, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you for your congratulations! Exploring the breadth and depth of love in seventeen syllables was quite an experience - so many paths to explore. Hope you are well and safe. Sending you warm spring hugs.
Y. Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 9:56 PM
Hi Sam, I agree, that sounds like true to me. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for your congratulatory message and for your always encouraging words! You really have a gift for lifting people up! Blessings to you!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Aww.. This is true and too good... God bless. ~ Ani
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Many thanks Ani for your sweet words and gracious message. Sending you bunches of blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 6:32 PM
so true and so nice
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Thank you my friend. It was an amazing experience to explore the depths of love in seventeen syllables.
Calasibetta Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Ah...so beautifully expressed sentiment of love! Take care. Paulette
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Thank you so much Paulette. I so appreciate your visit and lovely, uplifting words. All the best to you!
Mcintosh Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 3:51 AM
So true. Lovely. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Kauffman Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 9:28 AM
Thank you dear friend. I try to make this a daily thought routine but like all humans I slip. Thank goodness we have a loving God to catch me. Hope you are well. Sending you bunches of blessings.
Summers Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 3:50 AM
So very well stated. Words for which we should all aspire. John
Kauffman Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Hi John! Thank you so much for your visit and words of encouragement. It is my goal and my challenge. Take care. Hope you are well.
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