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Quenched

The darkness was prominent Hope only peeked in and out The synapses were not responding My mind was in a drought Then the rains came The land was quenched And brought hope about

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 9:17:00 PM
Lets hope for more hope:)the rains came,theland was quenched..excellent--Charma
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Date: 10/7/2009 5:09:00 AM
Nicely done metaphoric rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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