Quenched

The darkness was prominent
Hope only peeked in and out
The synapses were not responding
My mind was in a drought
Then the rains came
The land was quenched
And brought hope about
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 9:17 PM
Lets hope for more hope:)the rains came,theland was quenched..excellent--Charma
Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Nicely done metaphoric rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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