- Queen of the Forest -

True grace I hear the songs within her heart 
   Her hidden life, the secret 
   Glow from butterfly wings 






   - My first Kimo  :) .... 16.02.2015
     A-L Andresen :)
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Michaels Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 5:42 AM
Lovely imagery... this form looks an interesting variation on Haiku. Well done on your win!
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 12:48 PM
- Many thanks John, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ward Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win, Anne Lise. Julia, xx
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:50 PM
- Thank you for congrats, Julia :)
Squyres Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Marvelous kimo !! Tender and soft ... congrats on your win !!
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 11:35 AM
- Thank you for congrats, Debra :)
Mutindi Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Gongrats on your win Anne!
Andresen Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 1:12 PM
- Thank you for congrats, Grace :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 8:38 AM
beautiful as ever Anne Lise.. :) i esp like the first line.. :)! kudos!..hugs much!//olive eloisa
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 9:37 AM
- Thank you for congrats, Olive :)
Nance Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 4:29 PM
You have done well for your first kimo-many grats on your placement! ;)
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 9:37 AM
- Thank you for congrats, Casarah :)
Haight Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your win, Anne Lise! Nice poetic interpretation of the visual. Sandra
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 12:23 PM
- Thank you for congrats, Sandra :)
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 12:22 PM
- Thank you for congrats, Jan :)
Gasun Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:05 AM
This is absolutely a breathless beauty my very dear friend of mine, Anne Lise! I am hugging tightly this priceless gem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing!More blessings to you my very dear friend. Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:44 AM
- Dear friend Leonora, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De La Luna Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Lovely write, Anne! It is when we hear one's heart that we get to see one's true beauty and yes...butterfly wings are beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:15 AM
- Thanks Hija, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:04 AM
So sweet Anne Lise. Liked it. God bless.Glow from butterfly wings.Love
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:33 AM
- Thanks Rajat, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:53 AM
An excellent poem of utmost beauty of hidden life in heart. 7 indeed i feel. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:33 PM
- Bl, thank you for encouraging words and a 7 on my first Kimo - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:10 AM
You have a quick wit and an enviable imagination. Emile. #7
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:03 AM
- Always a pleasure to see you, Emile - Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cooper Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:19 AM
Anne Lise it is such a delicate graceful work you have crafted. I have never written in this style but i can see the beauty of it through your pen. love Shane xxx
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 3:42 AM
- Thanks Shane, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Dear Anne Lise, For your first attempt you did very well my friend this is simply beautiful, and i'm not just saying that either because I love butterflies, no this is just elegance at wing, cheri
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 12:32 PM
- Thanks Cherl, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Serenely, supremely beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:21 AM
- Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:20 AM
really love the style you drew this anne lise beautifully crafted dear pal
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:29 AM
- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:14 PM
very poetic and ell penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 2:08 AM
- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Elegant words, an enchanting image, Anne-Lise, a 7. Blessings eve
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 2:06 PM
- Always a pleasure to see you, Eve - Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Relish Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 11:04 AM
nice take on the visual Anne... good luck in the contest.. nad
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 12:44 PM
- When I read posted by: "Poesy Relish" ...... I think .... who ??? :)) .... I must learn your new name :))) - Thanks for the nice visit, Nadiya :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Your first "Kimo" Anne-Lise, and you have hit the target at the center! Very poetic!
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 12:38 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments - Always a pleasure to see you, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Nicely done my poetic friend..that visual was a tough one for me
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:15 AM
- Frederic, thank you for encouraging words on my first Kimo - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Very enjoyable and creative Anne!
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:14 AM
- Thank you for encouraging words on my first Kimo, Ken - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Nice take on the visual Anne Lise, good luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:13 AM
- Thank you for encouraging words on my first Kimo, John - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Eaton Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Such a graceful write Anne Lise. Good Luck. Janet
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:12 AM
- Thank you for encouraging words on my first Kimo, Janet - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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