Quavering of Love

quavering of love as cavern of cancer baits its worm of pity 11/6/2020

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/7/2020 2:39:00 AM

Sad. I've seen people die, like my wife especially. The hurt abates but not the memory.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2020 4:44:00 AM

Hugs ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2020 6:14:00 PM

great imagery and so sad!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 7:34:00 PM

Truly...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/6/2020 11:53:00 AM

Pierces me to the quick. So many I know have suffered so greatly. Superb haiku, Poetess!! ~ Pens on Fire

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 12:28:00 PM

Thank you. Glad I have poetry to help.

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/6/2020 10:34:00 AM

Can feel the quavering Kim, so deep so apt, so brilliant, so contemptuous, attempting to put the scourge of cancer where it belongs, in a cave with the worms, fantastic haiku, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, David!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2020 8:38:00 AM

- Excellent written, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 12:36:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!