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Quavering of Love

quavering of love
as cavern of cancer baits
     its worm of pity

11/6/2020

cancerhaiku

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Victor Buhagiar

November 7, 2020 at 2:39 AM

Sad. I've seen people die, like my wife especially. The hurt abates but not the memory.

Kim Rodrigues

November 7, 2020 at 4:44 AM

Hugs ~

Andrea Dietrich

November 6, 2020 at 6:14 PM

great imagery and so sad!

Kim Rodrigues

November 6, 2020 at 7:34 PM

Truly...

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2020 at 11:53 AM

Pierces me to the quick. So many I know have suffered so greatly. Superb haiku, Poetess!! ~ Pens on Fire

Kim Rodrigues

November 6, 2020 at 12:28 PM

Thank you. Glad I have poetry to help.

David Kavanagh

November 6, 2020 at 10:34 AM

Can feel the quavering Kim, so deep so apt, so brilliant, so contemptuous, attempting to put the scourge of cancer where it belongs, in a cave with the worms, fantastic haiku, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

November 6, 2020 at 12:28 PM

Thank you, David!