Quantum Specks

Something
In my mind
Is not the same-

Feeling nothing
None to blame-

Resonance has
Shifted
What a shame-

Single tear
Dissolves within

The rain-

Tiny quantum
Specks 
Grains of sand-

Once were
Patterns -

Woken dreams
I’ve lost
Cannot reclaim-

Now they dissipate
Right through
My hand-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 4, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Wow David this is an in depth write my friend.. analogies galore and wonderful emotional lines depicting hurt anger and luv all in one... thankxx for your sweet comments luv..
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