Andrew Crisci Poet Haiku

Quadruple Haiku-God Needs Our Presence

Wherever life breathes,
love beautifies everything
He has created! 

Waterfalls nourish
what's lies underneath as ponds
hold their fresh water!

It's a Paradise
we have lost since their first sin...
let us take it back!

God needs our presence,
to walk with Him and obey...
we can be holy!

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Sunflower Poetess July 11, 2011 at 2:59 PM Andrew, Congratulations on your win in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Glenna

Sara Kendrick July 10, 2011 at 12:25 PM Good one..Enjoyed this one..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 9, 2011 at 10:36 PM swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, andrew!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 9, 2011 at 9:20 PM CONGRATULATIONS! so proud to share the placement with you....smile..*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 9, 2011 at 3:36 PM Congrats Andrew on a fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 9, 2011 at 12:22 PM Congratulations on your win Andrew in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet July 9, 2011 at 11:18 AM Congrats Andrew on your win with this wonderful write...enjoyed.

John Freeman July 9, 2011 at 9:32 AM Andrew, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta July 9, 2011 at 9:19 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Andrew

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 3, 2011 at 7:21 AM let us take it back for sure Andrew.. excellent words of Haiku to express the message of faith and luv and hope .. impressive piece my friend full of spiritual expressions.. for life ..happy 4th to celebrate our freedom ...in Christ..luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 3, 2011 at 12:19 AM WOW! a great quadruple haiku...congrats for this great work... ^_^ junjun