Arlene Smith Poet Verse

Quadro-The Window of Youthful Dreams

A golden spark gleams
in aging blue eyes, faded gray.
Rain lulls her to sleep
through the window of youthful dreams.



01/12/17
Contest: Quadro
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 17, 2017 at 7:03 PM Wow, this touched me. Beautiful! Congratulations, Arlene, on your win with this fine Quadro.

Charlie Smith January 17, 2017 at 12:52 PM Terrific Arlene, a most deserving win, congratulations...

Joanna Daniel January 16, 2017 at 3:04 AM Great imagery and symbolism, Arlene:) congratulations on top win:)

Rob Carmack January 15, 2017 at 10:44 PM This is one of my favorites in the contest. Congrats Arlene.

Afzal Nusker January 15, 2017 at 9:40 PM Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2017 at 3:27 PM I love the symbolism of the window, Arlene. a beautiful poem and win. Congrats. Arlene Smith January 16, 2017 at 2:30 PM Thank you dear friend.. Still taking lessons from you on thinking out of the box and not being so literal in my interpretation..

Jan Allison January 15, 2017 at 3:09 PM Very beautiful lines Arlene congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May January 15, 2017 at 2:44 PM Beautifully penned...Congrats on your win

Mark Martin January 15, 2017 at 12:59 PM We're all young at heart. Great poem! Congrats on your win Arlene! :-)

Paul Callus January 15, 2017 at 11:57 AM Sun, a golden spark...sky and blue eyes...a metaphorical window of dreams....a combination for a winning entry. Congratulations on your top win, Arlene. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2017 at 11:28 AM arlene, the whole mellow imagery is the thing that stood out for me !... sweets congrats on your finest ranking and thanks for being part of this contest.. huggs Arlene Smith January 16, 2017 at 2:26 PM It is an honor to be placed anywhere amongst you all... Thank you for the generous placement in your contest, dear poet..

Agnes Krampe January 15, 2017 at 11:22 AM Love your quadro, Arlene. Congrats on your win.

Chris Green January 12, 2017 at 1:14 PM A very expressive and beautiful piece of writing Arlene. This one really speaks to me. Good luck in the contest.