Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

Q. and A

she asked
what is life without love?
the winds answered
no life at all

what is love with out proof
the waters answered
no love at all

what is proof without telling
the earth answered
no proof at all

she asked 
what is telling without truth
the fires answered
no truth at all

she asked
what am i without love
the spirits answered 
 -- simply ashes

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Cesar Cantu October 15, 2009 at 4:05 PM Oh....awsome flow @.@ and the last words echo...a lot...constructing other boxes in the laterals of a human head @.@ thanks a lot for the experience. Indeed, without love people are nothing more than frightened ashes, yet most persons have limited the meaning of love a lot. @.@

Donna Golden October 7, 2009 at 11:26 PM Fantastic piece, Rain! Thanks for sharing your work here on the Soup! Donna G

Kate W October 1, 2009 at 12:27 PM i really like this poem thank you for sharing it ..........always kate

Michael Romero September 30, 2009 at 4:29 PM nice write simple put together with true meaning.