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IMAGE: Unknown artist's DALL_E conception of Gunung Padang.
The pyramid at Giza 
is ancient they say,
but is it oldest
on the worldwide grid?

Some others say nay,
consider Java's Gunung Padang
built 27,000 years ago
a new study shows.

Archeologists raise their eyebrows,
they scoff and snort,
we must surely investigate 
those most moronic upstarts.

They question timelines ordained
by us long ago;
we can't be usurped
by those deluded pretenders!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/22/2024 4:40:00 AM
Unique and one that is not just insightful and informative but also made me ponder and think deep. I love pyramids of giza and you did an excellent job. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/21/2024 11:19:00 AM
- An exciting and interesting piece of writing, Chetta ... great done :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/21/2024 11:45:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/21/2024 7:48:00 AM
Congrats, Chetta. That was very informative and poetic too. Time to bury the pretenders in the Pyramids.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/21/2024 8:01:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/21/2024 4:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Chetta, Very nicely penned
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/21/2024 8:01:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2024 9:31:00 PM
Very original take on the pyramid theme so creative. Congrats, Chetta
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/20/2024 10:02:00 PM
Thank you. It was as a challenge to write, but fun even though I had to do some research.
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