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Like the pyramids a happy life needs a firm foundation - Mine 

a simple pyramid shape poem 

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Pyramid of happiness

Take a pinch of caution. A dash of pride. One dollop of charm. Add big lumps of kindness. Mix with a sense of humour. Throw in a large handful of love. Blend it all together with patience. And you will make a happy cake of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Treetop Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Happy person, happy cake of love! Congratulations on rhis winning entry!
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November 5, 2011 at 10:54 PM
;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Song Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 2:50 PM
I want to get cookin on this new recipe immediately!! How beautiful your kitchen must look! Fun write...very fun! Gwendolen
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Yep, it did.Congratulations!!
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November 2, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Margaret is this for the happy poem contest? I too was thinking of doing a ten line etheree.(great minds!) Anyway, I reread her rule, and unless I am wrong, I think she said it had to be at least twelve lines. I hope I am wrong on that, because I really had an idea for an etheree. (oh, wait, I see Carolyn is congratulating you. Maybe this one won in Brian's contest then?)
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November 2, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Perfect form and a great recipe by which to live, Margaret. You had me smiling throughout. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Congrats Margaret on third place win with this exquisite entry luv..
Quigley Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Sounds like a great recipe Margaret. Congratulations on your third place in Brian's contest
Brown Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 any theme" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 8:18 AM
I have found a little time and ambition to read some poetry today. I am pleased to have read yours Margaret. Love, Carol
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November 1, 2011 at 4:45 AM
Perfect and fulfilling. Tony
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