Pyar Ka Ehsas

PYAR KA EHSAS
suni si wo jindagi , jisme na koi chah aur na wo pyar ka ehsas
badte rahe jindagi me,jis trah kaat rahe the hum jindagi
ek ichha hui kisi ko pane ki
hum ho jate pichhe , shayd na mile hume
par mil gyi wo khusi ,jo umid na hume
khusi hui, pyar ka ehsas hua us din
lga hume mil gyi manjil, par thi meri khusi do pal ki
chali gyi khusi humare daman se
khusi na mile ab hume dobara
un khusi ke palo ko man me bsa rakha hai
ab na aur khusi ki ichha hai hume
ab unhi khusi ke palo ko maan liya puri jindagi apni
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Iqbal Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 1:32 PM
beautiful piece of work ...........
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June 9, 2013 at 9:42 PM
a wonderful poem and message... Linda
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June 8, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Love is a beautiful thing, it is more like a baby, it takes time to concieve her and watch her grow. Your piece is good, I wish to see you improve by the day...especially in your structure! I love the flow of thought. You are such a budding talent! It's great to read your piece this evening Vangita, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke.
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June 8, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Sangita ,a lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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