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Puzzled

new to the area

finding my way around

     identity problem

confusionidentitysenryu

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Jack Horne

January 2, 2021 at 7:16 AM

LOL, I agree entirely : )

Paul Callus

January 6, 2021 at 2:21 PM

Hi Jack. I found your comment by accident...not receiving any notifications from Soup. Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

March 11, 2016 at 1:11 AM

That neighborhood doesn't look like a place that inspires much free thought or individuality ... "identity problem" indeed! Excellent senryu.

Paul Callus

March 11, 2016 at 8:37 AM

Thank you, Timothy. Glad you like it! By the way, is there something wrong with Soup? I have spent all morning trying to access it, but to no avail! ~ Regards // paul

Kp Nunez

August 5, 2015 at 2:21 PM

:-) It really looks like a jigsaw puzzle with everything already on its place, Paul. :-) Seriously...good senryu here. HUgs!

Paul Callus

August 6, 2015 at 6:10 PM

Thank you for liking, Kim. It's not the ideal place to live....sort of expect to see all the inhabitants looking the same, too:) Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 3, 2015 at 2:54 AM

You got me puzzled by your title Paul and so I peek and indeed im answered and satisfied!(so busy Paul) catching on the commenting this time. ~Olive Eloisa =')

Paul Callus

August 3, 2015 at 5:03 PM

Glad you are not puzzled any more Olive_eloi:) I understand that you are busy...I know what it's like...priorities first. [I can hear your heartbeat:)] hugs // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 2, 2015 at 5:06 AM

Oh! for the sight of a green tree: the image fits poem perfectly. Best wishes Delice

Paul Callus

August 2, 2015 at 7:01 AM

Thank you for visiting, Delice. Not the ideal place to live in, but I suppose to those in dire need of housing it serves them well! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

July 29, 2015 at 3:55 PM

I have seen places a lot like this. I would rather live in a tent! Perfect title you chose for your poem Paul!

Paul Callus

July 30, 2015 at 4:50 AM

Hi Connie! I grew up and still live in the countryside; would never fit in a place like that! Thank you for visiting. Have a lovely day...and enjoy spiritual joy:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2015 at 3:39 PM

oh my . I think SO. Great illustration of the pictures with your POEM!

Paul Callus

July 30, 2015 at 4:22 AM

An identity problem it is, Andrea, but would not want to look at it as an identity crisis! I was very lucky with the picture, even though I knew exactly what I was looking for! // paul

Casarah Nance

July 29, 2015 at 7:58 AM

Wow that sure would be a problem! I never could live in a cookie cutter community, I 'd be afraid I was sleeping in the wrong house!

Paul Callus

July 29, 2015 at 3:15 PM

Neither could I, Casarah!! It would be a nightmare 24/7! Thank you for stopping by:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison

July 29, 2015 at 7:07 AM

The song 'little boxes' comes to mind Paul - great write:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

July 29, 2015 at 2:44 PM

I had never heard that song before, so I checked it out and I can relate its social theme to this senryu. Thank you for reading and commenting, Jan. Hugs // paul

Harry Horsman

July 29, 2015 at 5:47 AM

Read the signs Paul...your poetry will show you the way...

Paul Callus

July 29, 2015 at 2:50 PM

Thank you Harry; I'll go by your advice:) Trouble is I need a new key after unsuccessfully trying to open hundreds of doors!! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 29, 2015 at 4:43 AM

- There I would not stay ...... "an anthill" - Great written, Paul - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

July 29, 2015 at 2:47 PM

Pleased that you like the poem, but not the social environment:) I had a lovely day, thank you...may I now wish you a peaceful night, Anne Lise:) Hugs // paul

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