Puzzle Complete

last piece to fit now

a puzzle finished ..girl

you make me so complete
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Beaufort Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 4:18 PM
This is great. I feel like you put together something wonderful. I can't help but wonder what happens next. A real thought provoker--you. You--you are very, very good.
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Interesting Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Moreno Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 4:11 PM
A great senryu for a completed puzzle, nice work...Raul
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