Putting His Life On the Line

Born in the era of selfishness
he upheld selflessness
Putting his life on the line

They lived their lives for themselves
Not taking their kids to school
Fearing their kids will forsake them, when educated

He lived his life for others sake
Taking his kin to get education stake 
Investing all his wealth in faith
Putting his life on the line

The fruits of his work dedicated to us
While they had fun, eating and drinking wine
Now we see him reap, for he shall no longer grief
While they are now seeking relief
That is my dad, my best friend

By: Bakari Matano
Original poem by; Karen Croft
Title: about my dad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/18/2013 2:14:00 PM
Bakari, congratulations... ............ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:17:00 AM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:30:00 PM
Bakari, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Bakari xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest,, Bakari
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:49:00 AM
A fine tribute, thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/2/2013 4:07:00 PM
What an awesome dad you have...and what a wonderful man you are...I really enjoyed your poem a lot..God bless you and your family
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Bakari Matano
Date: 9/2/2013 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Donna i am happy you enjoyed, God bless you.
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