Get Your Premium Membership

Pushed Into Pain

i'd never know i could be so slow but the way things go they have me moving to fast if you could see the truth in me i'm sure we'd be together at last but it's just what you do that makes me so confused still crazy for you now i'm part of your past this time you can't erase when you first saw my face you left without a trace a missing piece to my cast i'll carry on try to be strong but what's so wrong i can't move on i can't take it my heart your breaking you've got me crying emotionally dying these scars left open my promises broken a piercing shatter it doesn't matter now i'm left waiting just suffocating tied up confused in what you do took away my fears but left me these tears i never thought it would turn out like this that life yould be throwing this twist that would leave me in a toxic kiss yet you'd still be the one that i'd miss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/12/2009 12:47:00 PM
i've been there. i can relate. well written. keep up the great work. vent your emotions. spill your heart till there is nothing left.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2009 10:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hannah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2009 4:44:00 PM
Please be strong this poem hit deep please try to move on The words in this poem tore me out of my seat so powerful good job keep it up and be strong
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things