Pushed Into Pain

i'd never know
i could be so slow
but the way things go 
they have me moving to fast

if you could see 
the truth in me
i'm sure we'd be 
together at last

but it's just what you do
that makes me so confused
still crazy for you
now i'm part of your past

this time you can't erase
when you first saw my face
you left without a trace
a missing piece to my cast

i'll carry on
try to be strong
but what's so wrong
i can't move on

i can't take it 
my heart your breaking 
you've got me crying 
emotionally dying 
these scars left open
my promises broken
a piercing shatter
it doesn't matter
now i'm left waiting
just suffocating
tied up confused
in what you do
took away my fears
but left me these tears

i never thought it would turn out like this
that life yould be throwing this twist
that would leave me in a toxic kiss
yet you'd still be the one that i'd miss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 11/12/2009 12:47:00 PM
i've been there. i can relate. well written. keep up the great work. vent your emotions. spill your heart till there is nothing left.
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Date: 11/12/2009 10:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hannah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:44:00 PM
Please be strong this poem hit deep please try to move on The words in this poem tore me out of my seat so powerful good job keep it up and be strong
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