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Pursuing Paradise

Where is paradise Golden drinks and water blue Your paradise solely rests in you… -Miranda Lambert- *haiku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2011 9:29:00 PM

thanks for the invite,,, Miranda, sure was a delight,, i like it,, yes paradise was hard to chase,,lol,,, i was not looking within my self,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2011 10:14:00 AM

I believe we make our own hell -- it is not a place but a state of tortured mind. So the reverse may be true as well. Our "paradise" my rest within us. Very interesting poem, Miranda. Thought-provoking. Best wishes, Carolyn

Duncan Chappell

Date: 3/4/2011 12:50:00 AM

very nice here my friend i like is so short but a big inpacked to it

Marymkilker Marymkilker

Date: 3/3/2011 10:51:00 AM

very short but sweet. Good read