Pursuing Paradise

Where is paradise
Golden drinks and water blue
Your paradise solely rests in you…
-Miranda Lambert-
*haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 16, 2011 at 9:29 PM
thanks for the invite,,, Miranda, sure was a delight,, i like it,, yes paradise was hard to chase,,lol,,, i was not looking within my self,..p.d.
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March 4, 2011 at 10:14 AM
I believe we make our own hell -- it is not a place but a state of tortured mind. So the reverse may be true as well. Our "paradise" my rest within us. Very interesting poem, Miranda. Thought-provoking. Best wishes, Carolyn
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March 4, 2011 at 12:50 AM
very nice here my friend i like is so short but a big inpacked to it
Marymkilker Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 10:51 AM
very short but sweet. Good read
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