Fathima Dawood Poet I do not know?

Pursuance

I watch as the rain pours down incessantly
I listen as the west wind howls past so silently
Yet to my destination I must pursue
My fate be tested my truth be told
Yet alas my goal is not yet in view
Steadfastly onto my burden I hold
Bathed in this monsoon rain I stand weathered
Yet I know that without a doubt I shall reach unrested

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Christopher Higgins December 1, 2008 at 5:31 PM The commitment in this write is so strong. I can see the rain and although I can't see the face the desire shines through. I loved bathed in this monsoon rain I stand weathered. Pure fire my friend.

Michael Torres November 28, 2008 at 9:26 AM Fathima this is great . I love this. What courage and perseverance in this poem. NEVER GIVE UP. I love this. The flow the word's this is my favorite from you. WOW excellent is not good enough. Michael Torres

Gbenga Onalaja November 28, 2008 at 8:29 AM Absolutely riveting, presenting your determination against all odds. its nice, love Gbenga