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Pursuance

I watch as the rain pours down incessantly I listen as the west wind howls past so silently Yet to my destination I must pursue My fate be tested my truth be told Yet alas my goal is not yet in view Steadfastly onto my burden I hold Bathed in this monsoon rain I stand weathered Yet I know that without a doubt I shall reach unrested

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/1/2008 5:31:00 PM

The commitment in this write is so strong. I can see the rain and although I can't see the face the desire shines through. I loved bathed in this monsoon rain I stand weathered. Pure fire my friend.

Michael Torres

Date: 11/28/2008 9:26:00 AM

Fathima this is great . I love this. What courage and perseverance in this poem. NEVER GIVE UP. I love this. The flow the word's this is my favorite from you. WOW excellent is not good enough. Michael Torres

Gbenga Onalaja

Date: 11/28/2008 8:29:00 AM

Absolutely riveting, presenting your determination against all odds. its nice, love Gbenga