OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'
PURPOSES loose &free everything & no thing verbalized peeling splendour fading an absence of atmosphere solid & audtere squashed by the natural into the occasional by the traditional teased into the surreal
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