Purple Haze

Something fresh to get by...
old fades into the night,
the ticking of the clock,
the passing of a phase.
Same wine bitter -
new label requested,
old pills gone - stronger needed.
More, more, more -
new, newer, newest.....
Goodbye old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 8:18 PM
this is very interesting!! And DEEP (like purple!!) Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work from Brian's contest..Congrats...Sara
Wesley Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Are you hooked George? Great poem that builds in intensity then the last line winds it up so well.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Congrats on your win, George! I enjoyed reading. Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "Ten For" contest George. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 3:09 AM
George...unusual theme and phenom writing!! Great expresssions penned in this winning write! Always a pleasure to get a peak at more of your work. :) Gwendolen
Burch Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 2:55 AM
CONGRATULATIONS, George!!! On your big win in Brian's Contest!! Well Done! Big Hugggss~Deb~
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March 17, 2012 at 3:12 PM
Aul, yes new new.. Lovely await....happy st. Paddy day ~ always*PD
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