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Purple Daisy

Pretty little frilly, Skirt up too high, Flouncing around, Reflecting the sky, Femininely dancing, Slender and tall Delightfully pleasing, Mystifyingly all, Showing to tease The wind, And his breeze, Displaying she reveals No shame at all, Purple little daisy Fragrances she sends Signaling her lovers, Also her friends, Looking to attract, Without any tact Cheerful intentions Night-time sleeps, Her dreams welcome. 02/03/2017

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 3/16/2017 6:22:00 AM

Updated this poems mistakes thank you x Slender and Tall mystifying All xxxx

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/16/2017 12:32:00 AM

You have found beauty in the small things. Well done..

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/16/2017 4:13:00 AM

Thank you paShang x

Judy Ball

Date: 3/3/2017 4:15:00 AM

Oh well done Wendy. This is a feel good poem that leaves you with a smile on your face. I love my garden and the colors and Gerber daisies are so colorful. Love the Happy Bouncy skip this has. From 1 to 7 this gets a 10 from me. God Bless, JB

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/3/2017 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Judy x

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2017 4:39:00 PM

lovely personification Wendy - ( love the imagery of the skirt too - I agree with Chris there are two sides to this poem it is very cleverly written Wendy!:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/2/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Jan x

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/2/2017 4:42:00 PM

Thank you Jan x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/2/2017 2:56:00 PM

Wendy I have never seen a Purple Daisy if I were to see one I would pick it up and put it into a jug of water. Nice poetry.

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/2/2017 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Darlene x

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/2/2017 1:56:00 PM

Reading your amazing poem I see the flowers on my rooftop garden dancing with joy! Today I have posted a picture like that on my FB. Wonderfully done dear, Wendy!

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/2/2017 2:01:00 PM

Hope your not offended Your flowers really inspired x

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/2/2017 1:59:00 PM

Demetrios your flower inspired me to write my poem all your flowers have inspired me x thank you x