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Purgatory Park

Shadow man where are you The sun has set for the day Tell me why have you ran away Why are you not treading with me Had for just forgotten all about me Or are you just scared of the dark Will you join me in the park Walk with me tonight please All I can see is a breeze Have you started a game of hind and seek Perhaps in the lake is where you reside Why are you not by my side I searched all night the sunshine has came up But no sight of my transparent friend Have you chosen to call this the end As I look down the side of the bridge You stand near my reflection right by the ridge The reflection I see had embraced the dark My spirit drifts to join them down near the bridge At the lighter side of the purgatory park

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Date: 10/17/2017 6:12:00 AM
Try to find the right form for your poems, I know it could be hard, but if you for instance take your end rhymes (aa bb cc dd) and google it, I bet you can find the right form :) That said: you have written a beautiful poem, so full of loss, sadness and longing... Take care!
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