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Purest Flow

Winterous river Flowing with unstained, white flakes Worthily righteous stream ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is for Raul Moreno"s recent contest

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Audrey Haick

Date: 3/30/2010 6:42:00 PM

Savannah, I tagged you to write a poem about being a poet...the ending line must read..."I am a poet"... My Soup Mail doesn't work...so i assume you never got my message regarding your request to be tagged..but it's not late...just write your poem and then tag someone else, ok? Thanks. Peace, love, Audrey

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/23/2010 9:51:00 PM

This was very good, Savannah...I enjoyed reading it. Soup Mail...if it comes with an error message, pls write me back so I can post my reply here in the comment box, ok? Love ya! Audrey

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/25/2010 2:05:00 PM

savannah this is great if you have read my poetry you will notice i dont have any haiku's, and there is a reason for that, i suck at them. it just goes to show you not to compare you work to others because we are all uniquely talented! i loved this haiku and thought it was beautiful and skillfully written.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2010 9:27:00 AM

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Savannah. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/24/2010 5:36:00 PM

Savannah~ A wonderfully done Haiku good luck in the contest! Laura :0)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/24/2010 4:30:00 PM

Quite a "righteous stream" you have given us, Savannah. Love this haiku! Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/24/2010 1:15:00 PM

Lovely images you left us with, Suvannah!