Pure Hearts -

pure hearts 
shine on their own
like fireflies in the dark 
that catch the eyes with their bright spark 
precious 

Cinquain poetry contest 
3rd place
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Empress Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Precious take on the cinquain form. Well written and i love the simile used here too. Pure hearts shine on their own too like fireflies in the dark. I agree. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:16 PM
such a sweet poem, i would love to see a firefly too lol:-) hugs Jan x
Roger  Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Thank you very much...
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