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Puppet Master

You’re my puppeteer,
Manipulating my love;
Emoting my strings.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:01 AM

Tugging on my heartstrings, your creativity is amazing.

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:08 AM

This one is executed masterfully. Wow, I'm amazed. DN

John Weber

March 25, 2009 at 12:11 PM

Great use of allusion here, Raul; I think this one poses universal appeal. I know I can relate to this! Warm regards, John.

Jane Bowen

March 25, 2009 at 11:18 AM

Puppeteer manipulating my love~! What a line....a strong write here Raul :) Great work creating your point and having such a fantastic outcome and flow. Delightfully relatable to the reader with imagery that everyone sees! It's good writing friend, very well done! always your friend at the soupie, Janers

Sharon Winter

March 25, 2009 at 6:19 AM

Extremely clever. You are a true talent. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

March 25, 2009 at 5:24 AM

ah yes, the great master - sometimes, those strings are too dang tight, arn't they? love, K

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:22 AM

Nice poem evoking great thoughts behind it............Danielle

Brian Strand

March 25, 2009 at 1:09 AM

Nice work Raul,Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 12:47 AM

Nice wording, like how you used emotions as strings. -Boo

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 24, 2009 at 10:26 PM

Very clever write, I can feel this one, Love will have you doing things you normally wouldn't do... Sometimes people prey on those feelings of love to get what they want...The title is perfect!! Great Senryu, Always Tyesha

Tyler Martin

March 24, 2009 at 8:08 PM

You sure know how to write a great poem, you pen is gifted. Tyler

Carrie Richards

March 24, 2009 at 7:14 PM

Clever and enjoyable senryu! Great job! :)

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:09 PM

Clever writing always flows from your pen. You amaze my eyes. Love E.

Laurie Ginn

March 24, 2009 at 6:22 PM

How very descriptive love the contentl

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 24, 2009 at 5:33 PM

Dear Raul, Stunning I wish I could be a part of YOUR POETIC group out there in OK. I would learn so much Thank-YOU for YOUR reply and the neutral Vote 3 -0-1 so far ALWAYS...HG