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Punctual Punctuation

from he'll to hell from she'll to shell well we'll see how deep it is a dash is a walk but two or more dashes makes me run a colon is a man's gland a gee spot poked fun at by a rubber covered proctologist's finger a semicolon however is not in any sense of the word a medical condition but as all bad poetry must end and so there is the period it seems a simple dot not a comma nor a comment but an end yet for mi Musa she sees it as a new beginning to an end of another month's cycle that she with the moon stays in tune always a blood moon but i realize that though twenty five the twenty nine and a half days that pass make her entire being whole .

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Date: 8/31/2019 8:36:00 AM
I like how you play with words. The sand box is not large enough to contain you. Also I have the feeling that you may not always play nice with some of the other kids. I enjoyed reading your thoughts this morning. May you be blessed by He who you thought you had imagined.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/31/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I was only able to get to some of your comments, but I'm home from work. I will try to get to as many as possible. First, I read on one of them "have a good weekend". Actually my weekend from work is Tuesday/ Wednesday; but never mind that because I need to introduce my real, true human being Muse. She has been the inspiration for all, but true stories and whimsies. She's an amazing person. Very much loved. mi Musa!!!
Date: 8/13/2019 5:03:00 AM
Hey Jeff , i enjoyed reading your poem , "a colon is a man's gland a gee spot poked fun at by a rubber covered proctologist's finger a semicolon however is not in any sense of the word a medical condition" loved these 2 stanzas
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/14/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Gregory for reading and commenting. And by the way my wife's maiden name is Ramos. Small world.

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