Pumpkins

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Poor Pumpkin growing on the vine Under the moon's watchful eye Mark for Jack-O-Lantern Picked by witch for Kids trick or treat In dark web Nights ghosts Spells 10/12/2015 Children Story Acrostic with a Syllables count Per Line 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

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John Beam

Date: 10/16/2015 10:53:00 PM

I enjoyed reading some of your poetry, thanks for sharing, this would have been a good poem, even if you did nail the acrostic.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/14/2015 7:42:00 AM

Enjoyable Halloween write!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/14/2015 6:58:00 AM

Excellent. Good one for Halloween. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Lei Strauss

Date: 10/14/2015 5:16:00 AM

Only makes me feel that it's Halloween. A 7 Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2015 10:04:00 PM

a cute one for halloween!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/13/2015 12:51:00 PM

Excellent. I've often wondered why this vegetable had the honor of being defaced for such a morbid holiday? I fear it has something to do with the cult of death. Anyway, I do not celebrate Halloween. Enjoyed your acroustic. / M

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/12/2015 9:01:00 PM

Spooky!!!!! :) hugs