Notes About The Poem

The highest wave hence seven syllables beginning 

soaring into cloud nine syllables creating waves warmly peak 

couplets join as two in one dream 

sailing into paradise i call it 

sweet sixteen lines 

Pulsing Highest Note Distant Love Sings

A delicate balance held under 
one cool breeze warmed by the sun

Frailty in love fragrantly echoes
deeply carried on birds song

Peace and serenity holds the air 
on a vapor trailing thought 

Looking around at heather blossoms 
withering caught in a web

Silent blowing warm brushing whispers 
rustling through the trees golden

Baby blue dressed with mother of pearl 
clouds scatter the sky sparsely 

Star of the sea beautiful vessel  
sails upon salted remains 

Your music plays the sweetest strings tug
swims to the heart in each beat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/11/2015 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful this is, I love your subject and how you conveyed it. A very brilliant friend of mine................A.M.
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:44:00 PM
- A beautiful picture you have described in your lines, dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:15:00 PM
Hi Liam!Another so very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet !Just delightful!Oustanding!Magnificent!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!And I just love your new poetry style in all too,Liam.Just very creative n' beautiful!Superb imagery!Excellent!Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:02:00 PM
another mellow offering from you, liam.. so sweetly designed.. huggs
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