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Pulse of Manila

This sunset of peach crowns the bay, aglow
While Manila lies in tropical bliss 
This region bustling with tunes as nights flow  
Along street cafes  where friends reminisce.

The jam of guitars floods a moonlit trail
Dizzy where tangy hyacinths delight…
Folks  prancing on rhumba beats to unveil
My city agleam... near a harbor bright.

Modern yet quaint, this scene is my life’s art
Afloat like an isle of eclectic flair,
Robed in temples,parks of inner child’s heart
For this dwelling charms with beauty to share.

In my abode of pearled Oriental grains,
Manila pulsates  in  festive refrains.




Where Are You From Contest
Sponsor: Joseph Soper
* Manila ( Philippines)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Schwartz Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Beautiful, this makes me want to go there :)
Cwiak Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 4:18 AM
Only one word to describe your poem..."Beautiful". Congratulations on your win.
Garg Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 3:31 AM
congratulations on your first place win. B'ful write. Deserves A7.
Nusker Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Beautiful poem, Nette. Congratulations!
Burch Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Hey nette!! Big Congratulations on your top win!!! Wonderful write!! Well done!! It's sounds like a place I may need to put on my bucket list...;) Big Hugggs!! Deb
Krampe Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Coming back with congrats on your win!
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Beautiful glimpse of where you live congratulations, Nette on your win. Hugs Eve
Lindley Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Huge congrats on your fine win my friend. As I previously posted here in reply- exceptional sonnet!
Fish Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Congrats on the win, I absolutely love this! Adding to my favs.
White Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Beautiful Nette, many congrats on your win :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Lovely! Congrats, Nette!
Zink Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Sands Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Very nice Nette! Congratulations :)
Lindley Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 12:32 PM
EXCEPTIONAL SONNET MY TALENTED FRIEND! The people there in the Philippines are what make it so special and beautiful!A7
Anish Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Sounds like a beautiful place!! I have never been there but my nephew one attended a wedding there. Good job! Good luck in the contest Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Krampe Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 10:15 PM
What a lovely, vivid description, Nette - now I want to travel there!
Vinson Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Nette, as usual - filled by your descriptive flair; it's great to hear about places around the world. : )
Green Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 3:32 PM
An absolutely beautiful poem about your home land Nette. It sounds so dreamlike and your poem takes us there.
Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 2:39 PM
- I wish I was there :) - Warm and beautiful written, Nette - Good luck in the contest - And : Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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