image courtesy of Haiku Shack
Poem written in response to above image and submitted to: creativeramblings.com/poetry/waterfall-fall-brook-recreational-area-pennsylvania-paul-carter/ on February 22, 2026
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Stones whisper in cold riverbed~ lost words scatter like embers. I kneel where light fractures, turning each shard inward. Something pulses beneath.
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